Heres some fabulas writing that Isaiah from room 8 has written!
All of a sudden I came steaming in to bowl. I whipped the 142g ball down the pitch. The batsmen wafted at the ball. It came back into him and went straight under his bat. A second later the ball hit the stumps. The bails went flying. The stumps came crashing down. I swung my arm wildly in the air. I jumped with delight. I had just picked up my team’s first wicket after a long streak being wicketless.
1 comment:
I really like the desriptive words that you put into your story its short but tells a hole story. :)
ShArRoN!!
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